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   August 29, 2018 04:13

This is already much better!

Still there are many quite big mistakes that prevent this from being bassed to the next level. For example the following:

- Extra lines should be longer and extend to the backbone
- The direction of extra lines is a bit too upwards in the lower section and a bit too downwards in the upper section. 
- There is also a quite big problem with pt no 6 - the lower line does not raise until pt no 6 - it starts to go down too early (shape is always important).
- Pt no 3 is way too low - it should be a lot higher.

Otherwise, the lines are precise and there is symmetry. If you take into account those things, you will sure be even better artist!