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   August 30, 2018 02:58

This is already a very good pattern - there are some things still that could be better - please take this into account.

1. The hight of the ending point should be a bit higher. At the moment it is a bit too low. Although it can be between the horizontal lines from points 1 and 4, it would be a bit better if it was higher up, closer to pt no 1 line. 

2. There is a minor symmetry flaw regarding the staring points of the lower lines. Those should be totally symmetric. 

3. Extra lines (upper fillers)( should be a bit longer. Those should always touch (or go very close) to the ending points of the main lines (or previous fillers) and continue on top of the back bone. 

4. Upper extra lines should start a bit higher up because then the brow looks even better after having healed. 

5. The third line of the 3-line combination should be curved the same way as all the others of the transition.

6. The first upper line should start a bit closer to the ending of the highest line in transition (the gap should be smaller).

7. The tail section of the brow should be filled with lines coming more from the inside of the brow - at the moment the last line (marked with red) at the tail section starts too low.

Compared to the overall level, this is of course superb. Still, please it would be greatly appreciated if you made one without those minor flaws to be escalated to the next level.